Feedback

Feedbackj is important to my film, I rely on my target audeince to give me constructive feedback as I would like to improve my film in order to get the ideas of the film across.

Some of the feedback was used and some views were taken into account but were later discarded as I either didnt have the time to finish the film or the shots I included were the only shots I had.

1) Equpitment: They picked up on the fact that in a proffesional film, the equpitment would not have been seen in shots. Mine was, from boom mics entering shots to a single camrea being placed in shot by accident. 

I took this feedback on board and decided to zoom in certain shots and change shots in order to get a better effect on a real film. However, shome shots could not be used and the limited amounts of footage I could use means that some shots have a camera in them at some point.

2) The visual effect that each shot has but the opening doesnt. The actual film has a grey tint over the top of it meaning it creates a dark and mystirious atmosphere towards the audeince. However the opening does not have this effect. Some people said that you should start mysterious and end the same.

I wanted my opening to fit with the other episodes and I prefer the not visual effects on it as it make it personal when introducing the characters.

3) The opening: The opening doesnt seem to fit in with the rest of the film. Where the footage stops the angles and faces are not very well finished. 

I re did the entire opening that the other episodes will hopefully use in their piece as well.