Backwell Agency
P4-Conceptual Offline Video
Offline Edit
To the right is my conceptual Promo video of my two interviewees Kate and Holly; I used this to get feedback from my peers and teachers to see if it fits the brief and my target audience.
P4-FeedBack
The feedback I was given was very positive and the criticism I was given was very helpful to improve my Promo Video as a whole as well the understanding for my target audience.
My first criticism was the small extras that will make the editing better and the visual design better. They wanted a whiter background, which can be changed in Premier Editor, but they said it will give the video a bit of brightness and fun as the positive activity they are describing is fun and uplifting. Zooming into my video might also help erase the black stand in the bottom left hand corner.
My second point made was they do not understand what CLOC actually stands for what it is. This is due to my fault, as the script I created doesn't specifically say what I am actually trying to promote. As I didn't evaluate this quick enough there isn't any more time to re-film the two interviewees, so I have decided to place 'Clevedon Light Opera Club' at the bottom in the first screen where their names appears so the audience understands what CLOC actually means. I might also place the logo in the bottom right hand corner to always promote and continuously show the positive activity.
My third improvement is the audio. I have not yet inserted the boom microphones sound, as this will be crisper and give the video a bit more of a professional finish. The sound is the audio from the microphone built on the camera, which can seem to be a bit disjointed and fuzzy. Also sometimes the singer can over power the interview that means I will have to change the volume throughout the video.